tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post2584004531588320088..comments2023-09-25T10:55:50.854-05:00Comments on Hilary Wagner: Teaser Tuesday -- EDWIN COPPERPOTHilary Wagnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18199287020561210673noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-84254520531371036012009-09-01T19:10:03.774-05:002009-09-01T19:10:03.774-05:00What great comments I get today! Thanks everyone! ...What great comments I get today! Thanks everyone! <br /><br />Storyqueen, I'm only two chapters away(I think anyway), but they are those wonderful chapters that have to be done right. The realization of everything without being too complicated, rich & complex without the complexity! I'm excited and would love to zip through them, but I want to make sure I give the story the perfect & proper ending! <br /><br />Thanks to everyone!<br /><br />xoxo -- HilaryHilary Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18199287020561210673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-57649270301358013872009-09-01T17:52:47.769-05:002009-09-01T17:52:47.769-05:00You have a very distinctive style. And the atmosp...You have a very distinctive style. And the atmosphere you have created in your book......creeptacular!<br /><br />How much longer until you finish?<br /><br />Shelleystoryqueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039684494823420722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-72783159975847909132009-09-01T16:56:15.627-05:002009-09-01T16:56:15.627-05:00Hilary, this is truly awesome: the description is ...Hilary, this is truly awesome: the description is so vivid and gritty. Beautiful!sunnahttp://amybai.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-3188590138882324342009-09-01T14:39:57.356-05:002009-09-01T14:39:57.356-05:00A little creepy, a little funny, all around a perf...A little creepy, a little funny, all around a perfect picture. loved this and can't wait to read this one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-70651865455611505172009-09-01T14:29:51.856-05:002009-09-01T14:29:51.856-05:00yet another great teaser! lol. filled with your u...yet another great teaser! lol. filled with your usual humor and creepiness! <br /><br />adored all the descriptions and innuendos. I also have to agree that the man doesn't sound like he's got the best of intentions for Bee!!!<br /><br />can't wait to read more!J.F. Posthumushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17033765098660171013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-27623619656246827522009-09-01T13:30:58.318-05:002009-09-01T13:30:58.318-05:00My favorite part was when he mentally filed away &...My favorite part was when he mentally filed away "Long Liz." Hee!Larahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02551925939303810818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-33305778508608452282009-09-01T13:19:32.581-05:002009-09-01T13:19:32.581-05:00Its so Dickensian in style, something I really ado...Its so Dickensian in style, something I really adore about your writing. Somwhere in the second or third listed description of the population my eye started skipping ahead. I love the detail and the words, but I'm not sure I need it the third time. Last line is brilliant.Gretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327185025020171674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-40823587975866677442009-09-01T13:04:38.146-05:002009-09-01T13:04:38.146-05:00Hound, you always crack me up! It's a shame we...Hound, you always crack me up! It's a shame we can't go back and edit our comments. I hate when I leave a comment with typos in it! I write so fast sometimes, it happens more than I'd like!<br /><br />xoxo -- HilaryHilary Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18199287020561210673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-82982663436182085082009-09-01T12:56:11.964-05:002009-09-01T12:56:11.964-05:00Um, yeah---I meant "Food, he thought, you mus...Um, yeah---I meant "Food, he thought, you must eat first." I'm the only one who could come up with "be eat". Argh. :)Debra Drizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750912933889904216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-83083905540174170592009-09-01T12:35:09.638-05:002009-09-01T12:35:09.638-05:00I heart your writing. It's fun and creepy and ...I heart your writing. It's fun and creepy and just delightful. Can't wait to buy your books.Rose Presseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15838717160840786213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-21727179893739352882009-09-01T12:32:29.346-05:002009-09-01T12:32:29.346-05:00That is too funny---I was just thinking "this...That is too funny---I was just thinking "this seems to fit into the Harry Potter class of writing" when I read Casey's comment. Great minds think alike. :) This was some seriously good description and scene building, plus I love the ominous tone. We just know something bad is going to happen!<br /><br />One tiny little nitpick--when I first read the line "Food, he thought, you must be eat first", my brain read it as the Food must eat first. I dunno if it's just me, but thought I'd point it out. Lol.<br /><br />Great stuff, as always!Debra Drizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750912933889904216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-50443831022362386232009-09-01T12:09:29.688-05:002009-09-01T12:09:29.688-05:00And this is why Casey McCormick is so awesome! She...And this is why Casey McCormick is so awesome! She accepts checks, cash of course and all major credit cards! Ha, ha! Thanks so much Casey. WoW! What a nice thing you say! I'm embarrassed to say I've never read Rowling! Not enough time! <br /><br />xoxo -- HilaryHilary Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18199287020561210673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-70465262528923134442009-09-01T12:01:11.518-05:002009-09-01T12:01:11.518-05:00Your writing, dare I say, reminds me of Rowling. ...Your writing, dare I say, reminds me of Rowling. I love the imagery. You use such crisp, descriptive words, and you use them perfectly. Can't wait to see what the world thinks of your books!Casey Somethinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596079290053524103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-87470478092048642572009-09-01T11:45:09.386-05:002009-09-01T11:45:09.386-05:00Creepy! Something tells me this guys does not have...Creepy! Something tells me this guys does not have good intentions. Great work setting the scene and building tension.lisa and laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18144863275895761642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-67922964729695709462009-09-01T10:35:52.722-05:002009-09-01T10:35:52.722-05:00Your words paint an image in my head!I love the de...Your words paint an image in my head!I love the descriptions you use! Its goes great with the pace as well. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5189127202681971190.post-17073421753417759602009-09-01T09:35:56.156-05:002009-09-01T09:35:56.156-05:00Awesome, awesome descriptive stuff here, missus: i...Awesome, awesome descriptive stuff here, missus: incredible squalor, poor hygiene, vitality, life, noise, smells. You cover all the senses. Frigging brilliant.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.com